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Title: Broken
Author: Mistress Kat / [personal profile] kat_lair
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing/Category: McKay/Zelenka, Drabble
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine, only playing.
Summary: Fanfic cliché in 100 words!

Author notes: Birthday present for [personal profile] entangled_now. Many thanks to [personal profile] wliberation for beta-duty.

 

Broken

 

“What are—?”

“Fixing.”

“You sure it’s—”

“Obviously!” Rodney snaps, glaring over his shoulder. “Why would—”

There’s a sudden whoosh as the ancient device activates, spreading outward like a giant flower.

“Hah!” Radek points a smug finger in Rodney’s direction.

However, before he has time to do anything else, Rodney whines low in his throat and drags him to the floor.

Then Radek can feel it too; a hot prickling sensation that shoots up his spine and makes him shove both hands inside Rodney’s pants. Their mouths crash together like a train wreck, desperate and unstoppable and a little bit broken.


Fin.


on 2007-07-10 03:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com
*shivers* Oooh, lovely!

on 2007-07-10 04:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Thank you! I managed to do "ancient sex pollen device made them do it" in 100 words! woot!

on 2007-07-10 05:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
That was very excellent, thank you! I love how important things in Atlantis always happen with a 'meaniningful pause' and then 'lots and lots of inappropriate stuff' It's true though, you made 'alien sex pollen made them do it' in 100 words. That's very awesome indeed!

on 2007-07-10 07:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
You are most welcome. I find most things in life happen with a 'meaniningful pause' and then 'lots and lots of inappropriate stuff' only the 'inappropriate stuff' at the end is rarely sex with a really hot guy like in the fics *sigh*

The thing about cliches reminds me... Go check out this: http://kat-lair.livejournal.com/35927.html?thread=847703#t847703 and see what myself and [livejournal.com profile] iniq are sort of planning. Because it is all sort of your fault and I already kind of volunteered you to get involved.

on 2007-07-10 08:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
There is far too little sex with really hot guys that happens after meaningful pauses! This should be remedied immediately.

I totally pimped my cliche list for you...Woohoo! I want to play too! Though this, without doubt, will likely make me write Supernatural filth. All those cliches, so many possibilities! Yes, without doubt I want to play too.

on 2007-07-10 08:46 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
Also, porn happens when things are my fault, tis a true fact!

on 2007-07-10 09:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
YAYNESS, LET'S DO THIS CRAZY THING!

on 2007-07-10 08:11 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pushkin666.livejournal.com
Yay. Cliches rule don't they? Lovely. I can just imagine it.

on 2007-07-10 08:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
clichés are clichés for a reason, because they can be so delicious sometimes... Thank you!

on 2007-07-10 08:28 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cinaed.livejournal.com
Mm, "weird Ancient technology making them do it," always a great cliche. *grins*

on 2007-07-10 08:36 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
such a useful plot device... "hmmm how can I get person A to do unspeakably filthy porny things to person B...? I know! Ancient sex devide for the win!"

on 2007-07-10 09:08 pm (UTC)

on 2007-07-10 10:05 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] nonesane.livejournal.com
Easily one of the best Ancient-thing-made-them-do-it I've read! And some clichés are just too good not to be repeated over and over again.

on 2007-07-11 10:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
awww thank you so much for leaving such nice feedback! And you're right, there's nothing like a good cliché to get thngs going in interesting direction...

on 2007-07-11 12:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Very nice.

on 2007-07-11 10:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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