Journal of Mistress Kat

One more DVD Commentary Meme answer. oikkuni   asked for a commentary on Root of the Matter, a Stargate Atlantis triple-drabble (Cadman/Weir, PG-13). Sorry for the delay sweetie, bet you thought I’d forgotten...


( DVD Commentary for Root of the Matter )



Another answer to the DVD Commentary Meme. desfinado picked a paragraph from Cinderella, she seems so easy. Please note that it’s the beginning of the sex scene, so consider the following NC-17.

( DVD Commentary on Cinderella, she seems so easy )

Third answer to the DVD Commentary Meme. pushkin666 wanted one on the waycest drabble Addiction.

And here is the second answer to the DVD Commentary Meme. redsnake05 wanted a DVD commentary on one of my Alex/Ryland drabbles Dream a Little Dream of Me.


( DVD commentary on Dream a Little Dream of Me )


PS. redsnake05 - I am working on your mix. It's ready in my head but laptop is making technicalities of putting stuff together very slow. Sorry for the delay baby but you will get it.

Here is the first answer to the DVD Commentary Meme.

zeitheist predictably wanted me to pick a paragraph from a fic in out anywhere_road ‘verse: The One With The Scratches (but Absolutely, Definitely, Positively No Talking).

However, this turned out to be tricky, so here, have a commentary on the whole fic...

DVD Commentary for The One With The Scratches (but Absolutely, Definitely, Positively No Talking) – posted over at the anywhere_road community.

 

Here is the Fic DVD Commentary for Part 2 of To Have And To Hold Down as requested by pushkin666

Thanks to everyone who commented on the Part 1 Commentary, it was really interesting to talk about writing with you all.

If you missed the first part...
General thoughts on writing porn/erotica fanfic can be found here
And the DVD Commentary for Part 1 of To Have and to Hold Down is right below it.

On to the commentary... Warnings for BDSM, spanking, dodgy-con, and graphic sex. Both the fic and the commentary are rated NC-17.

To Have and to Hold Down – Part 1
Fic DVD Commentary

 

A number of you expressed interest in reading a DVD commentary on some of my fics. Consider me flattered. 

First on the list is To Have and to Hold Down. Commentary on this was requested by pushkin666 who perseveres on her delusion that before I somehow corrupted her with this filthy BDSM fic, her love for Life on Mars was as pure as a driven snow. So far she has not provided an adequate explanation as to why, if she was so very innocent, did she decide to click on a story that warned for “BDSM, spanking, dodgy-con, graphic sex”. Really my dear, you’re not fooling anyone.

It is both challenging and almost uncomfortably personal to explain reasons and motivations behind a story that’s essentially nothing but sex. It skirts around issues people don’t usually talk about (they just write fics about them instead), can include scary amounts of self-reflection and result in half of your F-list leaving in disgust. 

I’ve tried to keep the risk of all to a minimum.

Please note the warnings above, the fic and the commentary are rated NC-17.

 

( First some general thoughts on writing porn/erotica. )

 

( Let’s move on to the actual Fic DVD Commentary. )