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Title: Elemental
Author: Mistress Kat / [livejournal.com profile] kat_lair
Fandom: Lewis
Pairing: Lewis/Hathaway
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 4 x 100
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing.

Summary: Four elements, four moments of realisation.

Author notes: Written last minute for the Lewis Summer Challenge 2015 over at [livejournal.com profile] lewis_challenge.



Water

James cleaves through the pool like a knife; each stroke sharp and precise as he swims from one end to the other. Eventually, he notices the audience, hauling himself out smoothly, water releasing its hold with reluctance Robbie well understands.

He feels moisture leave his own mouth as he watches the drops slowly roll down James’ neck, pooling briefly in the hollow of his throat before continuing their journey ever lower.

“New case,” Robbie rasps.

James nods, something unnamed in his eyes, waiting like a leviathan under the waves. With unexpected serenity, Robbie realises he’s been drowning for years already.



Fire

“There you go, lad.” Lewis places the pints on the table, sitting down with a sigh.

Outside, the autumn storm whips leaves against the pub window, their colour the same stark orange as the fire blazing inside.

“Much better,” Lewis hums, stretching his legs toward the hearth. The flames flicker and dance, wood popping and crackling as it surrenders to the fiery embrace of its lovers.

James watches the play of shadow and light over Robbie’s face, the familiar line of shoulders, and knows just how it feels. He too is burning, with intensity that will surely crack him open.



Air

“Yeah?” The suspect regards them arrogantly. “You’ve got nothing but hot air and fancy words,” he sneers.

Lewis bites down on a retort, smirking when James cocks his head contemplatively.

He watches with barely suppressed glee as James proceeds to lay out the complex trail of evidence, laying waste to denials with the kind of devastating finality of a level four hurricane.

Afterwards, the smile he sends Robbie is as bright as a spring breeze. A fierce mixture of pride and love stirs in his chest, makes his heart beat its wings with a startled courage of a new-born sparrow.



Earth

The afternoon swelters, wrapping around James like a blanket. He finds Lewis in the garden; the pungent smell of vegetation heavy in the air.

Robbie looks up, lifting a hand in a silent greeting. He’s kneeling by the dahlias, purples and reds as deep as blood staining the green. His face is damp with sweat and there is dirt clinging to his shirt, his bare arms, tanned and strong in the August heat.

James breathes; the dark spice of the earth pouring in like a promise. Here now is the centre of his world, the gravity that keeps him tethered.




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on 2015-08-22 02:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perclexed.livejournal.com
Ooooohhhhh these were lovely! If I listed everything I loved about each of them this comment would be longer than the set. But this one, especially:
With unexpected serenity, Robbie realises he’s been drowning for years already.

Yes. <3

(the fact that I'm thinking of merman James now has nothing to do with it.)

The witch is me is dancing at how well you've reflected each of the elements within them and their relationship. Just perfect.

on 2015-08-22 04:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
What's lovely here is your comment! My face went like this :DDDDDDD reading it. Thank you so much, particularly for quoting a bit that worked for you - my ego adores it when readers do that ;)

(Also, merman James would be a thing of beauty. I am shocked that this does not exist already. And forced to remind myself that I do not need another creature!AU to write...)

\o/ *twirls your inner witch* The concept of elements came to me a few days ago so I'm super, super pleased these worked, yay!

on 2015-08-22 05:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perclexed.livejournal.com
Of COURSE you could use another creature!AU to write. Do you think his tail scales would be a mix of blue/gray/green? muahahahaha!

Anytime anyone writes something into my favorite fanfics that can call to the elementals in me, especially when it's using a character that's really very religious? Serious heart!eyes. Maybe Marion Hammond was more right than she knew with that "Green Lady" comment. ;D

on 2015-08-22 06:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Ugh, shut up! quicksilver with flashes of blue, and he'd have sharp teeth. No little fishy, no sir, a predator like a cold water shark...

Heh, not sure why I've been thinking of the elements lately. Approaching autumn and the muse conspiring me thinks :)

on 2015-08-22 06:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perclexed.livejournal.com
This would be why he so very rarely smiles? Because people find that frightening and while he doesn't have much respect for humans, he doesn't like it when those he holds affection for flinch away from him?

(Not quite the aesthetic to go with the above, although perhaps it wouldn't be too hard to mesh, but why am I thinking of an adaptation of The Little Mermaid, because for James to give up that voice? *fans self, is all big, begging eyes AT YOU for anything remotely merman!James*)

Apologies for plotting (heh) in the comments to your challenge story, but honestly. Merman!James.

on 2015-08-22 07:40 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
God damn, there's probably a way to do this in a way that wouldn't be a straight up plagiarism of the awesome H50 fic Jaws (http://archiveofourown.org/works/165169) but I'm stuck on sharp toothed James with the shark nictitating membrane on his eyes that comes out when his control is slipping... So you know, when people call him a 'cold fish' they're not exactly wrong...

(Haha omg, singing crabs!)

on 2015-08-22 05:28 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] verdande-mi.livejournal.com
I truly loved this! You capture such a wonderful feel of trust and comfortability between these two and I love how the text very beautifully flows between tangibility and a sense of being adrift. If had to choose a favourite part I would go for Water or one of these two lines:

“With unexpected serenity, Robbie realises he’s been drowning for years already.”

“A fierce mixture of pride and love stirs in his chest, makes his heart beat its wings with a startled courage of a new-born sparrow. “

Thank you for sharing :)

on 2015-08-22 06:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Oh thank you so much! I definitely had that kind of middle-ground, semi-mythical but rooted in everyday feeling in mind when I was thinking about the concept of this so I'm so glad that seems to come through.

And aww *shuffles feet and blushes* Thanks so much for picking out quotes, I get giddy when readers do that!

<3

on 2015-08-22 05:59 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pushkin666.livejournal.com
These were just gorgeous. See what you can do when you put your mind to it. I love how you drabbles do what they should and tell a story in each one. So I'm going to pick a few words from each one that resonated with me:-

Water - With unexpected serenity, Robbie realises he’s been drowning for years already.

Fire - The flames flicker and dance, wood popping and crackling as it surrenders to the fiery embrace of its lovers.

Air - A fierce mixture of pride and love stirs in his chest, makes his heart beat its wings with a startled courage of a new-born sparrow.

Earth - Here now is the centre of his world, the gravity that keeps him tethered.

Earth is my favourite of the elements although I love your merman James. There needs to be more of this. Is there any part of him that is green?

on 2015-08-22 06:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Thank you very much darling for your generous comments! I'm just relieved to have written something...

Ah see, now you're just trying (and succeeding!) to make me blush what with all the quoting and things! Heh, all but one of the lines you picked are the last one which is a good sign because I consciously tried to finish each with a bang :D

Huh, that's interesting. Earth favourite element in general or out of the drabbles? Cos pondering on this I was trying think what 'your element' would be and my instinctual pick was fire with earth coming close second, but idk how much of that is just association with star sign lol :D

on 2015-08-22 06:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pushkin666.livejournal.com
Yes I noticed that I very nearly went for the last line in each element :) Earth within your drabbles, fire would be my element as I've always been fascinated by it and earth to ground me. So you were right with those.

on 2015-08-23 09:26 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
\o/ I'm now playing the 'guess the element' game in my head about all the people I know lol.

on 2015-08-22 07:39 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
wow, that was lovely and loved the use of the elements

on 2015-08-22 07:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Oh my, thank you so much! I'm super pleased the concept worked :D

on 2015-08-23 01:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] margaret-r.livejournal.com
I love the way you have created four individual stories that blend into one beautifully crafted and complete whole. The comfort and care the characters have for each other really shines through in it and all out lovely writing with so many memorable lines:) I’ll just throw one of the many I really liked at you;)

‘The flames flicker and dance, wood popping and crackling as it surrenders to the fiery embrace of its lovers.’ Followed perfectly by ‘He too is burning, with intensity that will surely crack him open.’

on 2015-08-23 09:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. I didn't think of these as necessarily parts of the same overall story - indeed, they can easily take place in different verses - but I'm so pleased the unifying theme worked.

Everyone is quoting things back to me and I am all squirmy and pleased and starting to believe my own hype :D That is to say, 'aww shucks, thank you!'

on 2015-08-23 06:20 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] megan-moonlight.livejournal.com
Thse are lovely! It's really wonderful how you describe their relationship and their feelings.
Each of them is very sensual, but I especially like the Fire one.

on 2015-08-23 09:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased that this concept worked. And yay, happy that the sensuality was there. Everyone seems to have a different favourite which is very cool!

on 2015-08-25 04:50 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] dryadinthegrove
Absolutely stunning.

on 2015-08-25 08:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much!

on 2015-08-26 10:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com
Those are delightful. So much back story and so much love (between them, and from you about them) in so few words! I do enjoy drabbles enormously - they're very clever and they encapsulate things so neatly - a bit like haiku. Plus - if I have very little time to read (which is the case this week), there they are, tiny gems to enjoy - and then come back to later to savour all over again.

on 2015-08-27 07:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Oh my, thank you so much! I'm really pleased by how much attention these little things have garnered *pets them* I was just talking about haiku and drabbles to a fellow poet who is excellent at the former and has done the latter too without knowing what they're called - original prose though, don't think she knew anything about fandom but I have linked her to the Fanlore entry on drabbles which nicely explains the origins and uses of the term :D

Anyway, thank you again for your lovely comments. I'm woefully behind with Lewis reading, hoping to catch up with the Malfoy series soon...

p.s. expect draft BB programme soon!

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