beta request
Aug. 28th, 2011 11:41 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Anyone willing to look over ~3,000 words of het needle play fic? It's Hathaway/Hobson from Lewis, but no knowledge of the series is required. The needle play is described in fairly graphic detail but there is very little sexual content in the traditional sense. Oh, and it's the lady in question who's in charge, in case that entices any femdom fans? I really just want a grammar/flow check, please?
Thank you!
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on 2011-08-28 07:59 pm (UTC)no subject
on 2011-08-28 08:06 pm (UTC)And, hope you're okay and secure for the hurricane!
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on 2011-08-28 08:10 pm (UTC)My email is planetkiller1225(at)yahoo(dot)com.
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on 2011-08-28 08:50 pm (UTC)Shall email it over momentarily, you ok with .docx?
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on 2011-08-28 09:16 pm (UTC)no subject
on 2011-08-28 11:08 pm (UTC)That's so not my kink, but it was really hot none-the-less.
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on 2011-08-29 05:06 pm (UTC)And yay for the hotness :D