Finally I get to read this and leave feedback. Yay *g* I remember you saying Dean was going to be broken in this and you weren't lying. There are a couple of lines that I'm going to quote back at you. I know how that makes you feel.
These are the details Dean kept to himself. He takes them out when he’s alone, like a hidden treasure, and marvels at the colours, runs his mind over the smooth contours of the memory.
That piece just made my throat tighten up, I'll be honest with you. I can just see Dean taking the memories out and running his mind over them, as you would a journal with your hands.
The other one was:-
NotSam is looking at his clenched fists and clearly not listening. It doesn’t matter though; Dean knows that Sam is.
I wonder with this whether Dean actually believes that Sam is there or whether he's simply fooling himself. Has he gone crazy? I couldn't decide I'll be honest with you although I was leaning towards crazy myself.
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on 2007-08-20 09:01 pm (UTC)These are the details Dean kept to himself. He takes them out when he’s alone, like a hidden treasure, and marvels at the colours, runs his mind over the smooth contours of the memory.
That piece just made my throat tighten up, I'll be honest with you. I can just see Dean taking the memories out and running his mind over them, as you would a journal with your hands.
The other one was:-
NotSam is looking at his clenched fists and clearly not listening. It doesn’t matter though; Dean knows that Sam is.
I wonder with this whether Dean actually believes that Sam is there or whether he's simply fooling himself. Has he gone crazy? I couldn't decide I'll be honest with you although I was leaning towards crazy myself.
Anyway, after all of that I loved it.