You are welcome! I'm really glad people have gotten something out of it. Otherwise I would feel like I'm just having some sort of egoistical monologue here... But luckily my f-list has a lot of interesting and insightful things to say back"
what you want the characters to do conflicting with what you think they 'actually' would do. Which tends to drift around the sex scene rather more than random dialogue or action parts. - yes, I agree. There's a line there that you can (and must) bend, but to cross it leads to god awful badfic where Ray voluntarily uses the words "I love you" and male anatomy gains new self-lubricating properties. Or something like that.
Once you go your way in the story and once you let him go his and I loved noticing that. - I think I know which parts you're referring to, but enlighten me anyway...
I also saw the allusion to cock-sucking experience as some sort of wishful thinking/justification for his own intentions. - see above my thoughts on this. It's fascinating how you got this out the fic, and clearly assumed I was being much cleverer and deeper that I really was *gg*
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on 2007-04-16 03:57 pm (UTC)what you want the characters to do conflicting with what you think they 'actually' would do. Which tends to drift around the sex scene rather more than random dialogue or action parts. - yes, I agree. There's a line there that you can (and must) bend, but to cross it leads to god awful badfic where Ray voluntarily uses the words "I love you" and male anatomy gains new self-lubricating properties. Or something like that.
Once you go your way in the story and once you let him go his and I loved noticing that. - I think I know which parts you're referring to, but enlighten me anyway...
I also saw the allusion to cock-sucking experience as some sort of wishful thinking/justification for his own intentions. - see above my thoughts on this. It's fascinating how you got this out the fic, and clearly assumed I was being much cleverer and deeper that I really was *gg*