Life on Mars Drabble: ZOOM

[kat_lair]

Another drabble from pushkin666's prompt.


ZOOM – Life on Mars – implied Chris/Ray – PG-13 
Prompt: hot summer's day and ice lollies



“Hurry up!” Ray hollered through the open car window, rolling a can of pop against his sweaty forehead.

The sun beat down, heavy and relentless like a bouncer’s fist. He really wanted a cold pint, but it wasn’t worth the reaming Tyler would hand out if he caught the two of them sneaking a couple of sly ones on the job.

“Got it!” The triple-coloured lolly in his hand was already melting and Chris licked at his fingers, lips sticky and starting to stain.

Ray felt himself flush, suddenly grateful for the hot weather. At least he had an excuse.

Comments

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

This makes me think of hot summer days when I was a child, and reminds me of Zoom ice lollies as well.

I bet you that Ray would like to slowly suck Chris's fingers clean.

Love this line The sun beat down, heavy and relentless like a bouncer’s fist.

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Mmm, sunshine and sticky fingers.

...that sounds kind of wrong. Um. :D

Ooooh, thank you for picking a line *squirms in happiness* I was kind of pleased with that one myself.

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

LOL that did sound a little wrong. Ray would totally catch hold of Chris's wrist though and lick then clean, his eyes on Chris the whole time.

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Well, Ray would like to do that, but not sure if he had the balls... Repression, he has it.

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

Even Ray has to break at some point.

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Heh, I was gonna ask what you thought Ray's breaking point was, but then I remembered I already wrote that fic *g*

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

Indeed. You really did.

[loz]

You add so much substance in only 100 words. Subtext, even. This is brilliant.

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, thank you very much :) Once a fandom, always a fandom for me and every now and then I return to write in them. Glad to know I haven't completely lost my touch with the characters.

[margaret-r.livejournal.com]

Nice! So much inferred in so few words:) Very well done, thanks for sharing:)

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Drabbles are mostly the extent of my attention span at the moment...

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

Very sensuous! I remember those lollies! The licking and flushing are erotic.;)
This is the only LoM icon I still have... wrong pairing but it will have to do!

[kat-lair.livejournal.com]

Heh, I had to pushkin666 for ice-lolly brands and flavours in the 70s UK as I lacked the required cultural context *g*

I have no LOM icons uploaded at the moment so have a random pretty boy.