Stargate Atlantis Drabble: Crime

[kat_lair]

First of three of inkblot_fiend's birthday drabbles.

Title = prompt

Stargate Atlantis – implied McKay/Zelenka – dark/horror – PG-13

Crime

“Stop.”

Rodney doesn’t move from the console. “Shut up and let me work! We’ve got…” he glances at his watch. “…shit, less than thirteen minutes until the system catches on to me.” 

Radek walks to the edge of his cell. “What are you doing, Rodney?”

“Getting you out!” Rodney’s eyes squeeze shut. “It wasn’t you, okay?” 

“Please stop,” The words are low and sibilant. He’s standing right above Rodney, on the other side of the invisible barrier.

 “You’d rather die?” Rodney snaps, pulling out the last crystal. 

“I’ll still die,” Radek says. “Just not alone.”

The force field flickers out.

Comments

[inkscribe.livejournal.com]

Ooooooh! I adore Evil!Radek. Thank you! This is fabulous. *g* (Damn drabbles for being so short though! I want more ... more I tell you!)

[spubba.livejournal.com]

<3 Evil!Radek.

Now I want to know what happened. Heeeeee.

[kanetsidohi.livejournal.com]

I'm completely lost!

Is Radek evil??? Why? What happened? Did he hurt someone? Is he going to hurt Rodney?

Pleeease, I need answers!

[dana-carter-sgx.livejournal.com]

I love your drabble.
Short, but it says all that needs to be said. No more, no less.
And the end, all creepy that lets the rest of the story to be told by your imagination.

In my opinion, is just... perfect. So, thank you for it!!!

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

Oh that's nice *g* I do like an Evil!Radek and I already have so many ideas about this fic.

[inkblot-fiend.livejournal.com]

Radek?! :O

I really love that... the tension and then the last line just makes me go "OMG BUT WHAT HAPPENED THEN?!"

Thank you! Awesome drabble... :D

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

You are evil.