Life on Mars Drabble: ZOOM

[kat_lair]

Another drabble from pushkin666's prompt.


ZOOM – Life on Mars – implied Chris/Ray – PG-13 
Prompt: hot summer's day and ice lollies



“Hurry up!” Ray hollered through the open car window, rolling a can of pop against his sweaty forehead.

The sun beat down, heavy and relentless like a bouncer’s fist. He really wanted a cold pint, but it wasn’t worth the reaming Tyler would hand out if he caught the two of them sneaking a couple of sly ones on the job.

“Got it!” The triple-coloured lolly in his hand was already melting and Chris licked at his fingers, lips sticky and starting to stain.

Ray felt himself flush, suddenly grateful for the hot weather. At least he had an excuse.

Comments

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

This makes me think of hot summer days when I was a child, and reminds me of Zoom ice lollies as well.

I bet you that Ray would like to slowly suck Chris's fingers clean.

Love this line The sun beat down, heavy and relentless like a bouncer’s fist.

[loz]

You add so much substance in only 100 words. Subtext, even. This is brilliant.

[margaret-r.livejournal.com]

Nice! So much inferred in so few words:) Very well done, thanks for sharing:)

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

Very sensuous! I remember those lollies! The licking and flushing are erotic.;)
This is the only LoM icon I still have... wrong pairing but it will have to do!