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kat_lair ([personal profile] kat_lair) wrote2006-09-14 10:46 pm

5 Things Meme – Fic for [profile] dark_cygnet

[profile] dark_cygnet asked for

(Now, I totally chose this to challenge myself. I’ve never written either John or Elizabeth, and, uh, HET OMG. Hope you like.) 

Five Ways Radek and Elizabeth Got John Into Bed (NC-17) - for [profile] dark_cygnet


1. When Radek approaches him in the mess, voice quiet and teeth worrying his bottom lip, John finds the shyness surprisingly sexy. He never looks John in the eye and John thinks it’s because he’s nervous. After all, it’s not everyday you ask your sort-of-friend-definitely-not-a-boss to help you with a special birthday treat.

Later, lying on his back, hands full of soft flesh and brown curls, he realises it had nothing to do with nerves. Elizabeth grinds down hard, head thrown, lost in her own pleasure. She and Radek groan in unison, and John would too, if he could. 

Radek never breaks eye contact, not even when he comes, his cock hot and brutal against John’s throat.


2. “It is a game, no?” he says, deliberately thickening his accent. “To play with friends?” Elizabeth is giggling against his shoulder, too far gone to be any help. Still, Radek likes to make her laugh. 

“Uh, yeah, but…”

“Are we not friends, Colonel?” He leans in, attempting to look mournful, and feeling almost bad when Sheppard buys it clean and clear. Almost. 

“Hey, now, that’s not… We’re great friends.”

Elizabeth is attempting to sit up again, breathlessly waving a hand toward the table. Radek thinks a pout might be too much but instead it’s the thing that finally clinches the deal. 

“Fine, fine. I’ll play.” John runs a hand through his hair, laying an empty beer bottle on its side and giving it a little trial spin. “Who wants to go first?”
 

 
3. Elizabeth may be stubborn but she’s not stupid. Even so, it takes her almost three years to admit that some choices are impossible to make. Thankfully Radek is a very patient man. 

The next time John comes for dinner he doesn’t leave for two days. And then only because he refuses to share a toothbrush anymore.

 

4. She tastes good. Like damp earth opening to reveal hidden treasures. Surrounded by the whitewhite strength of her thighs, Radek kneels by the desk, silencing all protests with his mouth.

There’s a reason they’ve never done this in her office and it’s not the one Elizabeth claims it is. 

Behind him, Radek hears a noise, a soft gasp and then the door sliding shut. He drowns his grin in the silky wetness, pulling down the zipper of his trousers, suddenly harder than he can ever remember being.

The hands coming to rest on his shoulders are hesitant, but less so than he expected.

 

5. In the end, it’s John who asks, drunk and laughing and a little bit desperate under all that. He tips back the bottle, slouching on their couch with too perfect casualness that speaks volumes. 

Elizabeth drops his hand under the table to brush against Radek’s, a gesture of relief rather than permission.

Sometimes other people’s loneliness is your responsibility. And sometimes you can find a way to fix it.


 

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[identity profile] dark-cygnet.livejournal.com 2006-09-14 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I love it, love it, love it! Thank you so much for writing this and honey, don't even worry about not writing John or Elizabeth, you did a fantastic job! Swansmooches the hell outta you!
trialia: Ziva David (Cote de Pablo), head down, hair wind-streamed, eyes almost closed. (Default)

[personal profile] trialia 2006-09-15 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
Well, it's certainly a new concept! But Elizabeth's hair is brown, not black.

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 11:14 am (UTC)(link)
heh, just amusing myself msotly. And, see, this is what happens when I write characters I usually don't... hair colour corrected, thanks for pointing it out.

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
glad you enjoyed it babes.
trialia: Ziva David (Cote de Pablo), head down, hair wind-streamed, eyes almost closed. (Default)

[personal profile] trialia 2006-09-15 11:23 am (UTC)(link)
You're welcome.

[identity profile] dark-cygnet.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Not a new concept in my part of the world. ;)

[identity profile] pierson.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, very *very* nice. I'm particularly enamoured of the first one. Lovely work in all of them.

I'm here via [Bad username or site: dark cygnet @ livejournal.com], btw.

Thanks for posting!

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
awww, thanks! Like I said, this was new ground for me both in regards to Liz, John and the whole threesome thing.

[identity profile] duestar.livejournal.com 2006-09-28 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Enjoyed these very much. Radek is such a wonderful character. I love to see him cherished -- especially by two important people in his life!!! Thank you!! And thank you, [livejournal.com profile] dark_cygnet , for providing the link!

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2006-09-29 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, Radek deserves to be cherished within the inch of his life. Thanks for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me.

[identity profile] rushingwind.livejournal.com 2007-11-13 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely! John/Elizabeth/Radek makes me happy! :)

[identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com 2007-11-13 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! It's a pretty amazing threesome, this was lots of fun to write.