ext_41412 ([identity profile] maladroitoracle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kat_lair 2014-01-12 05:13 pm (UTC)

It seems that I didn't comment on this fic in the challenge com! I tried to be a good commenter because I cherish all Lewis fics *cuddles all the awesome fics*

It shouldn't be a surprise to you that I loved this! "Undercover as gay" is my favourite trope and I can never get enough of it. :) Loved your pacing of this story, letting the reader see both POVs and how they pine for each other! And I adored your flirty OFC with her comment about bisexuality. And that kiss.... what a first kiss!

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