Now that I look at the fic it make a little more sense. But it's deeper then just reading it which mean good for you!(: It's great it has deeper meanings.
It make sense and it also make me sad): It's so cute and sad that JD feels this way. It will be great if you'll write more to this fic and explor those thing!
Maybe you wanted to do it lighter but I liked that it was more dramtic.