Wins award for most exciting and inappropriate thing ever to be read in a puplic place. - ahahahaha, omg this made me laugh so much! I feel... oddly proud! *accepts award, wipes away tear*

But! Thank you so much for this comment, how amazing to get such long feedback. And you go quoting stuff back at me (I should tell you, this makes me squirm and bush)... I'm actually really glad you picked on the final scene. I wasn't sure if it worked or was just too mushy, so I'm very happy you liked it :)