ext_28346 ([identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kat_lair 2009-03-21 02:11 pm (UTC)

Mmmmmmmm. Gorgeous fic. Too many lovely lines to start quoting but I loved the bit about time stretching like taffy. You seem to have got totally inside the fictional thoughts presented by the pic manip and turned them into a narrative. Brilliant. In part 1 the UST is almost unbearable then the sex at the end of part 2 is so hot. And I loved the little touches like the furries! Thanks for this!

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