ext_65010 ([identity profile] ginnystar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kat_lair 2008-10-27 10:16 pm (UTC)

Eee! I love it, so much that's said in so little.

Their fingers tangle clumsily until Gene drops his hands with an annoyed grunt.

Guh, that line alone has all their awkwardness and boy-ness wrapped up.

That last line... <3 So much left unsaid, but does it really, truly need saying? I think I almost love them better when they're not shagged up, but when they're getting so wound up with all this tension rolling off them...

Needless to say, I LOVE IT. Thank you, Kat! *snuggles*

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